I am always beat, punched and torn. I am taped back up and then punched and beat again. A punching bag with
what people think have to no feelings. I am mistreated only to help those who think they are something. Hurt is a
big part of my life, pain and suffering has been brought into my everyday life now. I know I may seem solid to
some, but for whats inside me, I am soft and full if feelings that are always hurt by those who don't care about the
harm that they put this punching bag through and the struggle that I go through to get through all the painful harm
that he/SHE has brought to me. Kids punch me and play me as if I am a game, as if I'm something to be
played with. People just don't understand me and these people never will.
I really like how you mixed your character with personal life expercience . Nobody should be or feel like they are someone else's punching bag . Overall I believe you did a good job on your personification essay.
ReplyDeleteWell you personification essay was interesting funny because you said that "you liked it when the kids punched you and played with you like if you were a game" nice analyization!!!!
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